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Is this the end?
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And there he stood;
In that first day,
When he's chosen 'bout his way;

Shy at first, with his first step;
Looking left and right for help;
Searching here and searching there,
Hoping that he won't despair.

And really soon, he realised,
What he wants, what does he thrive
And what he truly hopes to find.

Slowly, surely, his shell broke;
As his eyes from the dark awoke,
When around him, they arrived,
People, which he cared about.

But, as always, with good things,
Knowing what the future brings,
Thoughts of torment start to form,
Bringing him afar from home.

So there he found himself, apart;
From what he loved and cared and had
The only question in his mind;
"Is this the end?", or a fresh start?
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#2
Nice ;-))
.. and every end is the beginning of some new ;-))
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#3
I think I could sing it!
Let's see the bright sight of this world!
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#4
I'd be glad to hear you trying, Cath! Smile
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#5
Beautiful, my friend...

With such evocative words, even the most dire endings may blossom in new, brighter beginnings. Bravo!
"Let my worship be within the heart that rejoiceth, for behold: all acts of love and pleasure are my rituals."
The Goddess -
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#6
Whoop!

Really well done, keep it up!
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#7
I wish i could summon Jim Morrison back and let him sing this! God this is so amazing.. One can play a psychedelic song over those lyrics!
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#8
Thank you very much for your words. And I didn't expect that this random thoughts on mine, would be worth as a song lyrics. Smile
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#9
I told you! And why didn't you take it seriously?!
Let's see the bright sight of this world!
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