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Aubade
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(Tune in my head: Ravel - Menuet from Le Tombeau de Couperin)




You blessed this island from the start
with an offering of kind words.
You also blessed my heart
with the same -- and sullen concrete
witnessed as we became complete
and took our mutual pleasure.


But you must go to contemplate
your life and explore brave new worlds --
I must not ruminate.
Go then you cleverest of boys
for you must put away your toys
and take this world at your leisure.
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#2
Heart may you see each other again soon. Luv ya Big F.
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#3
Ohhhh.....*puppy dog eyes*....my emotions run to close to yours for me to critque your writing
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