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(Tune in my head: Ravel - Menuet from Le Tombeau de Couperin)




You blessed this island from the start
with an offering of kind words.
You also blessed my heart
with the same -- and sullen concrete
witnessed as we became complete
and took our mutual pleasure.


But you must go to contemplate
your life and explore brave new worlds --
I must not ruminate.
Go then you cleverest of boys
for you must put away your toys
and take this world at your leisure.
Heart may you see each other again soon. Luv ya Big F.
Ohhhh.....*puppy dog eyes*....my emotions run to close to yours for me to critque your writing