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No fear
#1
I remember this bright light.
I was freezing and yet it came.
It was no hope, it was worst, a fight.
When the whistle was blown, I was to blame.

I remember this warm liquid running.
I was hit but my blood was boiling.
It was no hope, it was worst, a shame.
When the whistle was blown, I was to blame.

I remember this pain, this blood.
I was no leader, I couldn't prove.
The mud, the dirt, I could handle.

I remember the looks, almost like a flood.
I was a support, they move, I move.
The rifle was lying next to me, I could take the handle.

When the sergeant blew the whistle,
We had to go, we had to deploy.
Everything went well, all clear, like a crystal. 
But then we hit a decoy.

They had from behind, a surprise attack.
 Crossfire, we dropped like flies.
After two hours of hard work, we had to fall back.
I tripped, I hurt my ankle, I couldn't tell lies.

We got crushed because of me.
They said that those things, I see.
I'm a follower, 
not a leader.

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Let's see the bright sight of this world!
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#2
*BRAVO*BRAVO*BRAVO*

I clap till my hands hurt my dear Princess... do I dare in French? Oh Shit, why not...

C'est tres Magnifique mon chéri *crossing fingers*
To be simple is to be great
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#3
C'est magnifique ma cherie pour etre exact 

And yes indeed it's superb i was shivering all along the text so intense
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#4
Thank you~!
Let's see the bright sight of this world!
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#5
Very well done!
Makes me ponder starting poetry back up again, it's been a while...anyway, good work!

Fear is the path to the Cath side.
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#6
Come! Join the Cath's side!

Wait...

What do you mean by that?
Let's see the bright sight of this world!
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#7
no matter the fingers I crossed, I always misspelled, hihihi...

Oh well, I guess you understood, right?
To be simple is to be great
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#8
I did!
Let's see the bright sight of this world!
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#9
Ma chère Cath.... je dirais même superbe! Smile

Ivan
"Let my worship be within the heart that rejoiceth, for behold: all acts of love and pleasure are my rituals."
The Goddess -
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