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No fear - Cath - 10-04-2016 I remember this bright light. I was freezing and yet it came. It was no hope, it was worst, a fight. When the whistle was blown, I was to blame. I remember this warm liquid running. I was hit but my blood was boiling. It was no hope, it was worst, a shame. When the whistle was blown, I was to blame. I remember this pain, this blood. I was no leader, I couldn't prove. The mud, the dirt, I could handle. I remember the looks, almost like a flood. I was a support, they move, I move. The rifle was lying next to me, I could take the handle. When the sergeant blew the whistle, We had to go, we had to deploy. Everything went well, all clear, like a crystal.  But then we hit a decoy. They had from behind, a surprise attack.  Crossfire, we dropped like flies. After two hours of hard work, we had to fall back. I tripped, I hurt my ankle, I couldn't tell lies. We got crushed because of me. They said that those things, I see. I'm a follower,  not a leader. RE: No fear - Simple Tania - 10-04-2016 *BRAVO*BRAVO*BRAVO* I clap till my hands hurt my dear Princess... do I dare in French? Oh Shit, why not... C'est tres Magnifique mon chéri *crossing fingers* RE: No fear - Sheilan - 10-05-2016 C'est magnifique ma cherie pour etre exact  And yes indeed it's superb i was shivering all along the text so intense RE: No fear - Cath - 10-05-2016 Thank you~! RE: No fear - _Barbie_ - 10-05-2016 Very well done! Makes me ponder starting poetry back up again, it's been a while...anyway, good work! Fear is the path to the Cath side. RE: No fear - Cath - 10-05-2016 Come! Join the Cath's side! Wait... What do you mean by that? RE: No fear - Simple Tania - 10-05-2016 no matter the fingers I crossed, I always misspelled, hihihi... Oh well, I guess you understood, right? RE: No fear - Cath - 10-05-2016 I did! RE: No fear - IvanXLIV - 10-06-2016 Ma chère Cath.... je dirais même superbe! Ivan