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Bubbling Crimson Dusk
Here's a little something. A bit on the down side and not my everyday poetry piece but I've been feeling like this for a while now and I had to let it out somehow. I won't say 'Hope you enjoy' because..... well it's not to enjoy. That being said, hope at least to get some critics about it.

Feeling lost
Hanging by a thread
Can't shake.... shake this weight off of my shoulders
Can't bear this loneliness
Can't take it any other way

Bursting in rage

Drowned by my sorrow
Blaming the world and cursing to the wind
I can't have it if it's... it's like this
I'm sorry........ but this is just not enough

My body aches
My soul shakes
My heart brakes
My mind wanders off
And I can't take it this way
"There's a time for daring and there's a time for caution, and a wise man understands which is called for"

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