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Send me an angel
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(10-14-2018, 03:55 AM)SissyNektar Wrote:
(10-13-2018, 05:18 PM)Dragon132 Wrote: Its a cute story in my opinion, will the protagonist be betrayed and his/her ass would be split like the Red Sea or did they just find their soulmate

Thanks, Dragon132 Smile

Truth is I haven't decided yet. As I wrote it, the thought of the incubus being a liar, its vulnerability just a show, did cross my mind. After all, demons are notorious liars. If I decide to continue writing this, and I decide to follow up that story seed, I'll have to write the player of the incubus and tell him "All similarities between the subjects in the story and real life are purely coincidental."  Tongue
XD , yeah stories always need a warning. You could also think about some kind of plot twist to spice things up. Most importantly tho have fun when you write it love.  :p
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Send me an angel - by SissyNektar - 10-10-2018, 06:42 PM
RE: Send me an angel - by Dragon132 - 10-13-2018, 05:18 PM
RE: Send me an angel - by SissyNektar - 10-14-2018, 03:55 AM
RE: Send me an angel - by Dragon132 - 10-15-2018, 01:11 AM

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