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(04-20-2016, 12:12 PM)DarkXtecy Wrote: Am glade you loved it, i just hope you continue to get stronger   as for the other guy, well there is just no way I can compete with him, words are my weakness, and i admit it lol.

Dark, poetry is in know way competitive, there is no winner or loser. The quality of the words and structure is irrelevant as long as the meaning gets across, which it most certainly has in your poem. As Anallee said "Most importantly the heartfelt intent is there. I felt it and I love it."

And as for 'the other guy,' I'm sure they would hope only to inspire, as others have inspired them. Don't be afraid or hesitant.


And to Anallee, see the power your words do, the journeys you take us on with each piece you write and share.