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Hello everyone,

I have been playing with haiku lately - trying to tell a story in three stanzas while keeping the integrity of the format.  Today, being Mother's Day, had me thinking about the most important woman in my life - all our lives.  So without further ado here is my work in her honour. 





Happy Mother's Day everyone, hug your mothers tightly!  I hope you enjoy my little offering!  




~  SK  ~

.....Niice.....

I did it shiro...I did it several times this weekend

and I was also hugged by my kids, LOVED every single one...

HAPPY MOTHER'S DAY

Nice Little piece there Shiro 

(05-08-2016, 03:28 PM)Fenix-TS Wrote: [ -> ]I did it shiro...I did it several times this weekend

and I was also hugged by my kids, LOVED every single one...

HAPPY MOTHER'S DAY

Same here Fenix, even cooked up a nice meal for her! 

(05-08-2016, 03:40 PM)W1LL Wrote: [ -> ]Nice Little piece there Shiro 

Thank you W1LL, glad you enjoyed it!

(05-08-2016, 08:27 AM)Shiroi Kurēn Wrote: [ -> ]Hello everyone,

I have been playing with haiku lately - trying to tell a story in three stanzas while keeping the integrity of the format.  Today, being Mother's Day, had me thinking about the most important woman in my life - all our lives.  So without further ado here is my work in her honour.   

She will always be,

The first to offer her hand,

Trusted graceful guide.

A bond unspoken,

From your first breath to her last,

A friend to the end.

Her love keeps you warm,

Whether near or far apart,

Like only mum can.

Happy Mother's Day everyone, hug your mothers tightly!  I hope you enjoy my little offering! 


~  SK  ~

Ahhhhhh Shiroi Kuren!  *sighs*  You touch my heart , you truly do. 

~   A   ~

(05-08-2016, 07:57 PM)Anallee Wrote: [ -> ]Ahhhhhh Shiroi Kuren!  *sighs*  You touch my heart , you truly do. 

~   A   ~

Thank you so much Ana, you're always so kind and thoughtful! 

(05-08-2016, 11:31 PM)Shiroi Kurēn Wrote: [ -> ]

(05-08-2016, 07:57 PM)Anallee Wrote: [ -> ]Ahhhhhh Shiroi Kuren!  *sighs*  You touch my heart , you truly do. 

~   A   ~

Thank you so much Ana, you're always so kind and thoughtful! 

So easy to do with special one(s) , and my best effort with the rest. 
 ~   Anallee

Hi Shiroi, great poem...Your mother, my mother, ALL MOTHERS, deserve it, and more, MUCH, MUCH MORE!

I happened upon this piece tonight at exactly the right time.  It warmed my heart and comforted when I needed it the most.  It's funny how fate works that way.  Thank you for this.

                                                                           ~   Seiryu   ~