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Looking back
And remember the moment
That I met you
Brings me joy

Knowing you
Became my everyday purpose

Look at your face
To find your smile
And bring me comfort

Lost myself on your simplicity
Found my world
On your friendship

 
Long I've waited
To meet someone like this
A lot I dreamed
About having you here
 
Would like you to know
How much I love you
Would like to hold you
On an endless moment
 
I wait by the moment
Where we find ourselfs
Where a smile is enough
To hold us both on a loving embrace

I rather liked this. The patterning of the stanzas was interesting. The feelings were also clear in expression. *Smiles* I enjoy your contributions.

That is.. *pauses for a moment, trying to think of an appropriate word* stunningly beautiful.

Alt my dear... LOVE IT, for real, you and sharp are making me waist a fortune in paper tissues!

very beautiful that's all that needs to be said about this.