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I just met you
And I feel lost in my mind
The place and the sharing,
the spark and yearning

I just met you
And I dont know what to do
My eyes into your blue
And this smile so true

I just met you
And I just feel so close
No sense to this feeling
Yet so true and telling

I just met you
And so much to discover
Your scars, your body, your soul
All that white to be brought whole

I just met you
And I have to let you go...
Hey Rick. Wow, what can I say? Nice piece you got there Tongue


Um abraço aqui da amiga eheh
(07-14-2016, 08:20 PM)Altaria Wrote: [ -> ]Hey Rick. Wow, what can I say? Nice piece you got there Tongue


Um abraço aqui da amiga eheh

Hehehe thank you
Glad you liked it Big Grin

A pastel de nata for you
Wow my friend, Excellent! Very deep and moving.
Does it come from a real life experience?

_Barbie_

Very well done, it shows emotion behind it and that can only mean one thing...

*snuggles*
Wow!! sheer class of words and perfect weighted selection! i dont know what i am saying but kuddos bro for giving such a literary excerpt
Look who's the poet   Wink

I liked it friend