. Her love is like an Earthquake
Powerful and uncontrolled
When she wants me I turn my head
but when I want her shes with him instead
Our love is like a Earthquake
Dangerous and Merciless
Straight to the heart and the point
She makes me hunger for more with Every Rumble
There Love is an Earthquake
Wonderful and Free
I am free now away from the danger
I am a Cloud above all else
This is my first poem on here and its not about anybody In particuler "hides from the pitchforks"
I like it; it captures a part of how I've been feeling the past few weeks.
Welcome to the Poetry Club, Brandon!
THEY LIKE ME..THEY REALLY LIKE ME
Yes They Did Brandon, and so do I! I like it very much!
I think my favorite line is "When she wants me I turn my head / but when I want her she's with him instead". The yearning in that statement is powerful and the rhyme couples them really well together, lending strength to the emotions that are portrayed.
*hangs around with a pitchfork* Hey? I liked it... but i brought it just in case what can i say?
Nice it's very espressive
