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Trix!! Yay! That's amazing. I don't see why you were so nervous of writing.

Wow. Fantastic poem, Trix. A bit of personal pride for me that you did use the style I suggested. A great contribution.

Amaing job Trix, so glad you are wrting as well!

Hi bella, amazing piece you wrote you are natural on that, please, keep amazing us with your poems

Big kiss

Beautiful words Bella, loved it

Did you get inspiration from Aldia in DS2? ^^

Meeting Aldia at a specific place, this is what he says:
"Young Hollow.
How you grapple, without falter, with this dreadfully twisted world.

Peace grants men the illusion of life.
Shackled by falsehoods, they yearn for love, unaware of its grand illusion.
Until, the curse touches their flesh.
We are bound by this yoke.
As true as the Dark that churns within men.

All men trust fully the illusion of life.
But is this so wrong?
A construction, a facade, and yet…
A world full of warmth and resplendence.
Young Hollow, are you intent on shattering the yoke, spoiling this wonderful falsehood?"

Also, "Life is brilliant. Beautiful. It enchants us, to the point of obsession." is another quote of his.

Sources: http://darksouls2.wikidot.com/aldia-scho...-first-sin
At the bottom it says "show dialogues", I think you'll like it. ^^

Yes some lines, in fact most of it, is Aldias dialoque, i liked that one quote, and because this is my first try at poetry, I started doing something simple, and re-arranged and slightly changed quotes from a video game character I liked (Aldia from DS2) into a Villanella style.

I forgot to add that to the original post.

Hope nobody is mad about it^^

(05-20-2016, 05:52 PM)Bellatrix Wrote: [ -> ]Yes some lines, in fact most of it, is Aldias dialoque, i liked that one quote, and because this is my first try at poetry, I started doing something simple, and re-arranged and slightly changed quotes from a video game character I liked (Aldia from DS2) into a Villanella style.

I forgot to add that to the original post.

Hope nobody is mad about it^^

Aldia is an amazing character, it's completely understandable. ^^

Very, Very Nice Bellatrix!  Powerful and moving