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Paper Plain - Simple Tania - 02-18-2018
Hi dears, long time... been busy, slowly returning, be patient...
Big kiss
T
Hun, the world breaks your dreams
Fading them in whitewater streams
I hold the rowing for you
I become a lagoon for you
Hun, the world leaves you freezing
Turning into a gray so displeasing
I mingle all colors for you
I become a rainbow for you
Hun, the world takes your breath
Weaving a sordid dance of death
I steady the pace for you
I become a breeze for you
Hun, the world made you mature
Walking by that garth so impure
I break the strings for you
I become sanctuary for you
So, I wrote you a love letter
And sent it in a paper plain
For us to fly far away
When the world is cruel
And there isn’t enough room for pain!
RE: Paper Plain - Willy_for_Boobies - 02-19-2018
Amazing ;-))
...
... and niiice to "read" you back ;-)))
RE: Paper Plain - Fernins - 02-20-2018
Hey miss. Great song from Carolina Deslandes acompanied by Rui Veloso. Such a cozy feeling and happiness it gives out.
RE: Paper Plain - Simple Tania - 02-22-2018
Hi Fernins, yes it is, inspired me to wrote this one, had to make some changes but i think i managed to keep the context, don't you think?
kisses
T
RE: Paper Plain - Fernins - 02-22-2018
Though you changed a few things, it still feels right. Still stirs me inside in a funny way
