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Spider - brandon1op - 06-03-2016
Spider
Her love is like a Spiders
Dangerous and Life Threatening
Some may find her a challenge
But others find her deadly
When we mate
I feel my fluids leave my body
I am her meal
There for her survival
She is a Spider
Sucking me dry
So all that's left of me
Is a empty Husk
of Who I once was
RE: Spider - Cuylie - 06-03-2016
I was surprised by the turn this took. I think the line that I like the most is "I am her meal / There for her survival" I don't know, it feels like something is driving this more than simple emotion, but something more primitive more elemental.
RE: Spider - brandon1op - 06-03-2016
thank you..that means alot
RE: Spider - Lacivious - 06-06-2016
This reminds me of a few RP sessions ive had XD
This is written much better tho =3